Even Smarternysun is willing to give credit where
credit is due. Today's Sun isn't half bad
it's not run-down-the-street-praising-its-name great,
but it's not the usual hang-your-head-in-shame awful,
either. No major gaffes to speak of, no glaring copy
errors. Congrats.
That being said, if this is the best they can do, no
wonder Mnookin and Kampinsky are leaving. William
"Please, Call Me Bill" Hammond, Jr. turns in an
adequate lead story about the state budget plan, but
fails to get in anything other than a few plaudits
from city and state officials; for instance, he tells
us where some of the money is coming from and going
to, but he doesn't get into the meat of the issue
whether the allotments enough, how much comes from
each source, or even what might be wrong with the
budget. While he notes that "some say that this will
make deficits worse in the future," to find out who
and why, you've got to turn to the Times, whose
own story has on-the-record criticism of the plan as
overly reliant on one-time sources like government
property sales. And while Hammond assures readers that
"state lawmakers are expected to pass [the budget]
today," what he doesn't mention and what explains
why no lawmakers are quoted is that they haven't
actually seen the budget. It seems a bit overly
speculative to say they'll pass it on the day it's
introduced, especially given that and this, too, is
a fact Hammond overlooks the budget is actually a
series of bills, each of which must be approved
separately and, as a corollary, could be defeated.
Then there's the "no comment" from Bloomberg or his
office. Taken alone, it's acceptable. These things
happen lawmakers don't want to be heard from on a
particular issue, or an issue emerges too late for
them to chime in. But it seems to happen a lot in the
Sun, and at particularly key points. Sometimes,
like the April 29 story about weapons
sales to China, the paper didn't take the time to
get in touch with the Chinese Consulate until late
Sunday night, and, not surprisingly, the consulate
didn't respond. Other times, stories are simply,
oddly, bereft of the "he said, she said" quotes that
give news stories the heft of, well, truth. Take
today's second story, "Sharpton Objects to Bloomberg's
Pick for a Police Job." The article reports that Rev.
Al Sharpton has criticized James Fyfe, the mayor's
pick for deputy commissioner of training, for comments
made at the Diallo murder trial. But as to what Fyfe
said, or why, exactly, Sharpton is criticizing him, we
don't know. Anna Schneider-Mayerson asserts that
Sharpton's criticism may be "the first sign that his
honeymoon with Mayor Bloomberg is over," but Sharpton
isn't on record with a single negative word against
City Hall. And both Bloomberg and Fyfe refused to
comment. To fill space, Schneider-Mayerson quotes a
raft of Fyfe supporters, and even - get this - gives
biographical information for the man whose name adorns
an award given to one of Fyfe's books. Huh?
Smarternysun recognizes that Seth Lipsky is proud to
call himself a "newspaperman," but there seem to be a
few lessons in editing that he has yet to learn: a)
Don't budget stories until you've seen them; b) if the
quotes don't come in, bump the story inside; and c)
just because you have the chance to attack Sharpton,
that doesn't mean you should take it. After all, this
is a newspaper, right?